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From a 2023 article in Popular Science, of which I was the sole copyeditor for several years:
From The Whole Foods Diet (2017):
Here’s an example of more extensive queries and rewriting. I worked with a professor of political science on New Armies from Old, a book about military integration (the practice of maintaining peace after civil war by combining the formerly warring factions into a single national force). Here’s a representative passage before and after my edits:
After:
Further samples (of both writing and editing) available upon request. Something specific you’d like to see? Let me know!